Men do most of the high-level jobs. Should the government encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women? What is your opinion on that? Use your own knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

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a woman
the woman
puts their hundred percent effort in every way of
work
as physically as well as mentally.
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woman
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the same power with men in the
field
of
work
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a woman
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the field
fields
a field
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to
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and government should be reserve a
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a proportion in relation to a whole (which is usually the amount per hundred)
percent
of seats for
woman
in the job
field
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Gender disparity
  • Affirmative action
  • High-level jobs
  • Gender quotas
  • Workplace diversity
  • Meritocracy
  • Empowerment
  • Reverse discrimination
  • Cultural change
  • Board representation
  • Glass ceiling
  • Equal opportunity
  • Professional advancement
  • Gender bias
  • Role models
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