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The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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Recapitulate the data provided in the chart form by highlighting the important aspects.
Overall
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, the figure represents the increase
of
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 population in Japan from 1950 to 2055. By covering all the trends (past, present, perfect).
This
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 information specifically focused on
the
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people aged 65 or above. The above data is represented in two forms. The bar chart, they are showing the results of 16
years
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 that include their past, present and future. There is a significant increase in the rate for the year 1990
till
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 2015. These
years
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 show the mass is around 125 million. But they are expecting that in the near
future
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 that amount will decrease to about 89 million. On the other part, the table is in a more summarized format which shows 4
years
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 of record in two forms (millions and percentage) of the citizens above 65
years
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 of age.
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 the table results in millions will be at a peak in the year 2035
whereas
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 the percentage
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 will get
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rise in 2025.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "represents" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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