The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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the graph , a study between 1979 and 2004 was made in order to report

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fish and

meat

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consumption

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in a European country. In relation to the variations

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consumption

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during the years , the graph

shown

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that

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fish

consumption

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is more or less the same in all these years

whereas

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meat

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consumption

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has significantly changed.

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chicken is the kind of

meat

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which has the lowest record in 1979, as revealed by the image during the research period his

consumption

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had grown a lot , raising the highest level around 2002 among the other kinds of

meat

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. In the same way ,

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beef and

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lamb had been characterized by

high

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a high

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level

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levels

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of

consumption

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in 1979 which

has

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decreased during the years. In 2004 the lamb’s level of

consumption

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is almost the same

of

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the fish

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