the graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a european country between 1979 and 2004. summarise the infomrations by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

the graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a european country between 1979 and 2004. summarise the infomrations by selecting and reporting the main features  and make comparison where relevant
As we can see
by
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the graph , a study between 1979 and 2004 was made in order to report
the
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fish and
meat
consumption
in a European country. In relation to the variations
of
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consumption
during the years , the graph
shown
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that
the
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fish
consumption
is more or less the same in all these years
whereas
the
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meat
consumption
has significantly changed.
Firstly
,
although
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chicken is the kind of
meat
which has the lowest record in 1979, as revealed by the image during the research period his
consumption
had grown a lot , raising the highest level around 2002 among the other kinds of
meat
. In the same way ,
the
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beef and
the
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lamb had been characterized by
high
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a high
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level
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of
consumption
in 1979 which
has
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decreased during the years. In 2004 the lamb’s level of
consumption
is almost the same
of
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the fish
one
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.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words meat, consumption with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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