You have decided to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor that was advertised in the April edition of the magazine Teaching Professional. This ad was posted by Mr John Sullivan, director of the Spanish department at The Language Institute of Great Britain in London, England. In your letter to Mr Sullivan:

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Dear Mr John Sullivan, I would like to apply for the post of Spanish instructor advertised by the director in the April Edition of Teaching Professional magazine. I am a graduate of

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. I'm looking forward to discussing my curriculum vitae personally with you. Yours sincerely, Adam Rashidat.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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