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You have decided to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor that was advertised in the April edition of the magazine Teaching Professional. This ad was posted by Mr John Sullivan, director of the Spanish department at The Language Institute of Great Britain in London, England. In your letter to Mr Sullivan:

#job #spanish #instructor #edition #magazine #ad #mr #john #sullivan #director #department #language #institute #britain #london #england
Dear Mr John Sullivan, I would like to apply for the post of Spanish instructor advertised by the director in the April Edition of Teaching Professional magazine. I am a graduate of
University
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the University
 of Ibadan with
first
 class degree honours in Spanish Language. I have been teaching in a high school for the past three years in which some students have passed through my tutelage. I have
also
 prepared so many students for quiz and essay competition in Spanish language in which we won national awards. I
also
 have pleasant and communication skills. I am presently relocating to United Kingdom
next
 month, so I think I will be suitable for the job. If you find my skill and experience suitable, please contact me on my phone number 1334 or e-mail address ry@yahoo.
com
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Com
. I'm looking forward to discussing my curriculum vitae personally with you. Yours sincerely, Adam Rashidat.
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