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The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment.

The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment.
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There is a table that shows
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 of monthly salary in the four categories by five different European countries. In
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food and drink, Turkey and Spain have the highest percentages.
UK
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The UK
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 is at the top to utilize for housing. As
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 final
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 in clothing and entertainment, Germany has the highest percentages among the other countries.
According to
 the table, in France, people spend on
housişng
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housing
 mostly with 31% percentage. It can
also
seen
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for
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in
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 Germany. Clothing
locate
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 at the bottom for both countries. Housing is the category which is the
mos
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most
spend
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spent
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 income by
UK
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the UK
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 and in general. Clothing and entertainment
shows
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 the same numbers for
UK
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the UK
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. For Spain and Turkey, their highest percentages have in
food
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the food
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 and drink category. Moving on
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 other categories, Turkey has the least percentage in clothing.
On the other hand
, entertainment is
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 at the bottom for Spain with 8%.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 5 times.
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