In some schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts subjects (e.g. literature), and boys tend to choose science subjects (e.g. physics). Why do you think this is so? Should this tendency be changed? Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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attend a science
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social stereotypes
  • gender roles
  • arts subjects
  • science subjects
  • parental expectations
  • upbringing
  • role models
  • underrepresentation
  • STEM
  • curriculum bias
  • educational system
  • teacher bias
  • school environment
  • personal interests
  • natural aptitudes
  • gender representation
  • economic factors
  • job prospects
  • cultural expectations
  • historical context
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