In some schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts subjects (e.g. literature), and boys tend to choose science subjects (e.g. physics). Why do you think this is so? Should this tendency be changed? Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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school and

university, different course

are being studied

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is being studied

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the subject

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female choose art classes while male usually opt to

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attend a science

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female are more interested toward

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patience and discipline.

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influenced

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the aggregate of past events

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the male

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more keen toward learning new

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of or relating to technique or proficiency in a practical skill

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give rise to; cause to happen or occur, not always intentionally

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study and passion.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 5.5

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Topic Vocabulary:

social stereotypes
gender roles
arts subjects
science subjects
parental expectations
upbringing
role models
underrepresentation
STEM
curriculum bias
educational system
teacher bias
school environment
personal interests
natural aptitudes
gender representation
economic factors
job prospects
cultural expectations
historical context

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