Some businesses prohibit smoking in the company and also governments who issued ban on smoking in public area How do you feel about it

Smoking in evidently is hazardous for health. There are some business firms who have banned smoking in their offices as a step to help employees lead a healthier lifestyle. There are
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some governments who have completely banned the use of cigarettes in public places. Even though
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a great initiative by the businesses and governments, it is a personal choice whether someone opts for it or
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. The positives of smoking are all about either making a style statement or having fun with it. People like to smoke when they are under extreme pressured circumstances, like family issues or work stress. They like to smoke and chill when they are with their colleagues or friends.
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, the government m
akes good amount
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makes a good amount
of profit by selling tobacco and cigarettes, which is
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used to b
uilt
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build
schools, hospitals and p
ublics
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public
places like parks or gardens. I probably would not see any other positivity in
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. Talking about the negatives, if we go to read the history of people who are passive smokers or rigorous smokers the effect on their health has been very dangerous and intimidating. When you have a chain smoker around you, your friend or colleague or your family member, it not only affects the p
erson but
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person, but
the people who a
re close to them
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are close to them also suffering
also close to them suffer
are close to them also suffered
are close to them also suffer
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suffer immensely. The number of deaths due to smoking h
ave been increasing
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has been increasing
is increasing
was increasing
has increased
every year, making it a global concern. Governments have been initiating anti-smoking campaigns and imposing rules to help people understand the adverse effects and encourage them to eventually quit smoking, especially the youth. Well, I would like to end
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by saying that we will have a better and healthier world without the cigarettes. People should refrain from smoking in places where there are non-s
mokers but
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smokers, but
should
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be allowed to smoke in smoking zone areas or elsewhere.

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