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Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia,britain or America in order to study at school, college or universities. Why do many students want to study in English ? Why is English such an important international language?

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Millions of people travelling each year in different English speaking countries
such
 as Australia
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britain
a monarchy in northwestern Europe occupying most of the British Isles; divided into England and Scotland and Wales and Northern Ireland; 'Great Britain' is often used loosely to refer to the United Kingdom
Britain
 or America.There are different aspects I will tell you in
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 paragraph.
Firstly
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many students wants to study in abroad.
In addition
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they want to make their future bright.In different countries people speak
English
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the English language
language
.
However
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,
English has become
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trendy
 in world wide. Many People Wishes to learn English
language
.
However
, when they move in different countries, English
become
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becomes
 compulsory for them to speak.Not in the Australia or America people
also
 speak in English in Pakistan and different countries. English
become
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becomes
 an international
language
.
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Most
 people's speaks in English when they are in meetings for business purposes.To teleological all the benefits of people
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
 is compulsory for all. From my point of
view the
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view, the
 people who learn English they have not faced any contretemps in future.By
leaning
the cognitive process of acquiring skill or knowledge
learning
 English
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 when people go in other countries they gain different knowledge about their country.English
become
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becomes
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an international language
language
 because in different countries rules apply to speak in English.

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