The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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present

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time, purchasing things have been digital and

also

becoming increasingly more popular.

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essay will discuss the pros and cons of shopping online

as well as

how the advantages preponderate the drawbacks. It provides

also

personal experience

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online shopping. There are two primary benefits of purchasing online. To start with, it is convenient for most people. Since it is done online, the internet provides a variety of choices where people could buy stuff. Consumers

doesn’t

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have to go far places, like overseas or even malls which

most

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of the time

crowded

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to get something they want.

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can just select and click

then

pay even pay online using their credit or debit card. Another thing is that online shopping is

cost effective

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. Most of the

items

are on sale and has less price

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to the one they are selling

on

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physical stores. The reason for

this

is that suppliers and business owners

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have to pay rent for the spaces of their goods.

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, online shopping has its drawbacks. Two possible disadvantages are

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of scamming or fraud and the

items

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not

same

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as what is posted online. Scam or fraud

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possible since consumers are buying it online and paying even before receiving it. After paying it, the seller might not send back the

items

that the client bought. Another thing is

the

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credit/debit card hacking which hackers used

fraud

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online selling

scheme

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to gain access

on

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accounts and eventually lead to

unauthorized

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the unauthorized

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use of

it

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. Another thing there can be an instance where the product is not as good as it appears upon receiving it. An example was when I bought a coat

few

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months ago. The price is reasonable and it appears

like

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in the photo that the quality is good even the

color

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I like it. But unfortunately, when I receive the item the cloth is thin and the

color

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is a little bit faded. I was so disappointed and I even thought of returning it but

then

I read the terms of returning and it will be inconvenient since I have to send it again and pay the shipping and even I cannot make a full refund of the money. One thing more, the money won’t be given as cash

instead

it will be deposited

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my account on the site and I can use it in the future if I purchase something from them so I decided to just keep it. With all the mentioned pros and cons, I still find online

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. Considering I don’t usually go out and shops in

mall

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the mall

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,

also

I could choose varieties

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the

items

I need

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cheaper

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a cheaper

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price.