The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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time, purchasing things have been digital and

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becoming increasingly more popular.

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essay will discuss the pros and cons of shopping online

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how the advantages preponderate the drawbacks. It provides

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personal experience

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online shopping. There are two primary benefits of purchasing online. To start with, it is convenient for most people. Since it is done online, the internet provides a variety of choices where people could buy stuff. Consumers

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have to go far places, like overseas or even malls which

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of the time

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to get something they want.

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pay even pay online using their credit or debit card. Another thing is that online shopping is

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. Most of the

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to the one they are selling

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physical stores. The reason for

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is that suppliers and business owners

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have to pay rent for the spaces of their goods.

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of scamming or fraud and the

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as what is posted online. Scam or fraud

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possible since consumers are buying it online and paying even before receiving it. After paying it, the seller might not send back the

items

that the client bought. Another thing is

the

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credit/debit card hacking which hackers used

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online selling

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accounts and eventually lead to

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. Another thing there can be an instance where the product is not as good as it appears upon receiving it. An example was when I bought a coat

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months ago. The price is reasonable and it appears

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in the photo that the quality is good even the

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I like it. But unfortunately, when I receive the item the cloth is thin and the

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is a little bit faded. I was so disappointed and I even thought of returning it but

then

I read the terms of returning and it will be inconvenient since I have to send it again and pay the shipping and even I cannot make a full refund of the money. One thing more, the money won’t be given as cash

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my account on the site and I can use it in the future if I purchase something from them so I decided to just keep it. With all the mentioned pros and cons, I still find online

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. Considering I don’t usually go out and shops in

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I could choose varieties

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the

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cheaper

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price.

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4 paragraphs

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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More and more tasks we do at home and at work these days are by robots. Is this a positive or negative trend?

Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

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In many parts of the world, women study science and technology, but donot work in these fields. What measures can be taken to encourage women to work in science and technology?

Some employers offer their employees subsidized membership of gyms and sports club, believing this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so.