The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarize and report the information.

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The pie charts present information related to

water

consumption by three main sectors in six

regions

of the world. Let’s explore

further

how

water

is used across these

regions

. It is evident that agriculture commands the largest share of

water

in four out of the six

regions

whereas

industry is the biggest

water

user in the other two.

Water

use for agricultural purposes is the highest in Central Asia with a whopping 88% share,

however

, at the other end of the scale, agriculture accounts for only 32% of Europe’s

water

budget.

Industry

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is the leading

water

user in both Europe (53%) and North America (40%), but

this

sector’s demands are minimal in Central Asia (5%), Africa (7%), South America (10%) and South East Asia (12%).

Water

is diverted for domestic purposes the most in South America with a 19% share and with lower shares across other

regions

reflecting a global reality that domestic

water

use is never a leading

water

user.

Finally

water

consumption patterns are indicative of the

regions’

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region’s

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economies: the developed West allocates more

water

to “fuel” its industry,

whereas

the “Global South” pumps

water

into its field to develop its agrarian-based economy.

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