Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In today's

schools

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school's

arguments over which is the most beneficial subject is increasing, the

first

party believes that

History

is the most important one, while the

second

part sees that in modern world

science

and

technology

would be more helpful for students.

This

essay will discuss both opinions and try to answer

this

question. There is a famous phrase which says: "Those who don't learn from

History

are doomed to repeat it",

this

is the main reason which motivates

History

scholars and teachers, to teach

History

to the public in order to avoid making the same mistakes our fathers did. While I do agree with

this

point, I don't believe that the world where are living in

right now is

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right now has been

right has now been

completly

to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent

completely

differant

unlike in nature or quality or form or degree

different

from the world 30 years ago!

thus

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Thus

, it requires a new set of tools and viewpoints to deal with it. Based on

that I

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that, I

think teaching

History

to students is helpful,

however it

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however, it

is not a

nessecity

the condition of being essential or indispensable

necessity

. With the rapid

accelaration

an increase in rate of change

acceleration

technology

and the new findings and discoveries in the

diffrent

unlike in nature or quality or form or degree

different

fields of

science

, many education experts are recommending focusing on

technology

based education. Encouraging young students to pursue

science

and

technology

path would result in a knowledge-based-economy, plus it would allow them to find their maximum abilities and

potintials

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potential

potentials

. Based on the above mentioned points, I

am believe

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believe

that

science

and

technology

subjects would be more useful for the students and their

socities

an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization

societies

in the future. It would insure the sustainability of the global in the way that insure its progress.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

Some people think that schools are too competitive and that this has a negative impact on children. Others believe the competitive environment encourages children to achieve. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. In some cultures, children are told they can achieve anything if they work hard. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message? Write at least 250 words.

Many goods including what we use on a daily basis produced by other countries need to be transported from a long distance. To what extent Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

the amount of shops that closed and opened since 2011 until 2018.

How do you feel about the impact of technology on social isolation? Give some examples to support your view.