The reason that most individuals are in debit is due to the overuse as well as irresponsible use of credit cards. Banks should not issue credit cards unless they are completely sure of an individual’s ability to pay back their debits.
To what extent do you agree with this?

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In
this
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modern word, almost all the processes has
gone vir
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have gone
tual, payment and selling are not the exception.
Cred
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it
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A credit card
The credit card
card
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which is well-known as one of the plastic money gives purchasing power to the person even if he or she does not have enough cash.
This
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has made peop
le extravagant and
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people, extravagant
put them in debt
which cau
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debt, which
ses dangerous consequences for both people and the
card
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issuer. To resolve
this
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problem, the bank should check the history of the applicant’s
credit
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records before issuing
this
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facility.
To begin
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with, as people could purchase without thinking the price and the income, they become imprudent and would purchase the things which they might not need.
This
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tendency of the consumer increases liabilities and make
the
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makes
m bankrupt.
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, the citizen are not conscious about
credit
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limit and due date of the payment.
This
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means they will have to pay heft
y premium of
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a hefty premium
hefty premiums
the interest which is more than any loan like home
loan or
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a home loan
home loans
vehicle loan. As they end up without the money, they might not be able to compensate.
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,
credit
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card
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certainly brings a failure if not used judiciously.
This
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failure affects the economy of the country as a financial institute and its stakeholders are harmed economically. Owing to the customer under high
ly deb
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high
it who does not have enough liquid to pay back, the bank would have to use external forc
es like deb
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forces, like
t collection agency which may use wron
g ways for
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the wrong ways
such
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repayments.
This
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could make the negative publicity for the organization and its stock price may fall.
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, the ruined patriot
also
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suffers financially and mentally.
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, the one who cannot repay may lose its property and capi
tal which dis
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capital, which
turbs him economically and psychologically. Under
such
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pressures, person may attempt to suicide.
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, these disastrous consequences insist a background check by the financial agencies before providing a
credit
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card
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. To conclude, I strongly believe there should be a stringent rule by the company to provide the
credit
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limit below the salary.
Such
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rules ensure win-win situation for both the corporation and customer of the
credit
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card
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.
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cards
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