Nowadays, people make new friends using social media and internet chat groups. Some of them believes that is good. Other people thinks that face-to-face conversation is beneficial. Discuss both sides.

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In the era of information technology, we all are using several devices like mobile, tablet, laptop

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TV to fulfil different purposes.

However

, within

this

long usage period, we

also

communicate with different people for different causes. To make

this

natural intention of human to communicate with other humans, different types of social medium and

internet

chat

group were established. More and more we are becoming dependent on

such

online communication, more the debate regarding the issue arises whether making new friends online is better than face-to-face communication.

Firstly

, we cannot deny the fact that we all are highly dependent on

Internet

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the Internet

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Facebook

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google. So, we cannot ignore using the blessings for our help. Nowadays, with the use of social media and

internet

chat

groups we can easily meet new people with

same interest

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the same interest

of us which would be difficult without it.

Moreover

, using social media people from distant places can easily interact with each other and get familiar with another. In short, social media and

internet

chat

groups help people to make friends

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with

different regions, cultures, backgrounds.

However

, most of people have different ideas regarding the issue as they believe that to make new friends, we should communicate with people face to face rather than through social media and

internet

chat

groups. Mostly the claim comes from different unfavourable events where people were victimised and faced different scams and frauds.

Moreover

, friendship should be based on trust from both

sides but

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sides, but

in social media and

internet

chat

group people tend to be ostentatious which kills the trust issues right from the root.

Therefore

, most of the friendships

inititiated

bring into being

initiated

in social media and

internet

chat

groups end up with failure.

On the other hand

, in face-to-face

communication there

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communication, there

is no scope to hide any truth which makes it go forward with natural flow and based on trust. In the circumstances above, we can not give verdict to the

favor

promote over another

favour

of just one side as both online and offline exchange becomes existential part of our day to day

life but

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life, but

we can demand sensible usage of online relations which may make it quite

phenomenal way

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a phenomenal way

of making amazing friends.

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