Nowadays people make new friends through social networks and internet chat groups. Some people think this is good. Others think face-to-face interaction is essential. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #friends #networks #internet #chat #groups #interaction

With the advent of Information Technology

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communication has seen

conspicuos difference

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a conspicuous difference

conspicuous difference

and social networking has become widely popular.It has gained popularity not only among

teens but

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teens, but

also

among

older generation

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the older generation

older generations

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Although

through social networking it is possible to connect with the people from diverse culture I think face to face meet ups are important.I will be discussing both the sides and lend my support for the latter

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There are numerous social networking sites encompassing twitter

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facebook

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Facebook

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instagram

which are widely these days.

Increase

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An increase

in the number of virtual friends helps in online business which people

find

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are finding

more convenient now a days.It is possible to share and communicate ideas among people sharing common interests

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There are many real life examples where people find their life partners through these sites.

However there

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However, there

are many hidden dangers in establishing relationship through these sites.Often the people on the other side need not be communicating for the same reason as you are thinking.

First they

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First, they

gain your trust and gradually ask to share your personal information and other details.Once they realise you have fallen for

them they

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them, they

misuse those

informations

a message received and understood

information

and ask for money or result in sexual exploitation. Most of these online friends would be disguised as someone people

generally gets

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generally get

attracted.These issues would often make the victim depressed and even results in suicide if not addressed immediately. Albeit there are many advantages of making friends across

globe

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the globe

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its disadvantages outweigh them.We should be wary while interacting with online friends and should not share any personal

informations

a message received and understood

information

with them.

Also we

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Also, we

should educate

younger generation

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younger generations

the younger generation

about the consequences. Conversing over a meal is more healthy and refreshing than virtual communication.

Mon Jan 27 2020

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
23Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

275 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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