You live near a university and would like to earn some extra money by renting a room in your apartment to a student. Write a letter to the university housing office. In your letter, • introduce yourself • explain why your apartment would be a good living place for a student • describe the room you have for rent

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I would like you to know that, I am planning to share my

apartment

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with a student. I am

single

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a single

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full-time working man, wants to share a

room

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which is favourable among the students. I am a Mechanical

Enineer

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Engineer

by profession who is very neat and

punchtual

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punctual

. I usually woke up at 6

everyday

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in the morning and coming back at 8 in the night. I am very keen and joyful

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and living in a dream in

this

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heaven. In order to, I am working full-time, my

apartment

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will be empty half of the day. It has a perfect

ambious

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ambitious

ambient

for a student. As it is in the most demanding area, it is 7 minutes away from the university and has

the

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grocerry

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grocery

store in the neighbourhood. The

apartment

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has

gym

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and swimingpool which is open for all the

teanents

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tenants

tenents

tenets

. The

room

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from the

two

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two-bed

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bed

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bedroom

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room

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apartment

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includes all the

ammenities

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amenities

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for

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just $375 per month. The

room

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has its own bathroom and balcony with

the

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river view. Please note that the kitchen will be shared. Thanks in advance as it will be gone whoever comes

first

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

189 words

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The Greeting

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The population of many cities is growing rapidly. What are the effects on people living in these cities? What can be done to maintain the quality of life of these people?

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