you are studying and doing a part time job . A full time position recently opened in the company and your manager is asking you to quite your studies and start working full time. write a letter to him and say what is your decision? why did you make the decision? suggest a solution that will suit both you and the company.

Dear sir, I am writing
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letter regarding
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job which you have offered me. As I can see there are lots of clients coming every day, and we need a senior physiotherapist in OPD
for
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full
time
.
First
of all, I am
felling
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privilege that you choose me for
this
post. But unfortunately, I cannot work
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full-
time
. As I am pursuing my ‘Masters in Neurophysiotherapy’, and I am in
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year in which I have to complete my thesis, and I have my preparatory exams followed by my university exams in 4 months. So, I need
time
for preparation. After my university
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I have
a
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leisure
time
in which I can join as
full-
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physiotherapist at your rehabilitation
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, and I would be fresh with the knowledge. It will be my pleasure to join
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your clinic as
senior
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physiotherapist. I hope you consider my situation and do keep open the job for me.
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faithfully, Akshay Jadhav

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