some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Today, in
this
modern era due to the development of high technologies and busy schedules,
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to look after their children. But in few places parents are so Suggestion
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involve
in deciding their children's life which Suggestion
involved
really impact
their children's thoughts and growth. Suggestion
really impacts
Therefore
, parents should be always careful while raising their children.
First
of all, in my opinion all the childrens
are not samea young person of either sex
children
,
as their way of Accept space
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response
, thinking, adaptation everything is different and concerning that parents has to Suggestion
responding
response
.It's true that Suggestion
respond
its
very important for parents to encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free it is
it's
time
. For instance
, at this
stage of development they will learn things quicker in group
or organization, they will Suggestion
a group
also
make new friends and able to learn the way of society which assist them in their growth and development.
Secondly
,
now a days Accept space
,
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
are more involved in playing games and they prefer
to spend their free Suggestion
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time
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alone, not
such
situation parents have to encourage them to spend their time
more properly otherwise
such
childrens
are more prone for mental disease instance like loneliness, depression a young person of either sex
children
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.
However
, in few cases
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a few cases
,
it's better to let children Accept space
,
to learn
how to occupy themselves on their own. Suggestion
learn
For instance
,
children who are intelligent enough to know what to do, if you tell them to do things they may not like it which may become a cause of change in their Accept space
,
behaviors
and thinkings.
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
Additionally
,
sometimes you should let them spend their Accept space
,
time
as they wish so that,
later they will learn Suggestion
wish, so that
lesson
of their wrong doing and they will always be careful of not repeating their mistake.
To conclude, as being the parentsSuggestion
the lesson
a lesson
lessons
,
it's their love and responsibility to encourage their children to do things, but at some point they should keep in mind that their children are grown enough to know what is good and bad.Accept space
,
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