Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?

Superstars of television, film and other media are given a big amount of

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and it has become a controversial issue in the entire world. I am

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in agreement with it and I would suggest that skilled workers

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should be paid more. They are

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real heroes of our societies. In the following paragraphs, I am going to discuss some of the reasons why we should not give too much

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to the stars only for their fame.

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place, in order to validate my thoughts, there are several reasons. The

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one it is to be understood that if the

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and

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to the cricketers or to film stars, it may happen that they can

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that

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on wrong ways.

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, the

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should

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understand that giving too much

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to celebrities is

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good, but

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it for social good causes like education of children,

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, they can

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it to ensure a good education for poor people.

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that stars having good publicity and they have their own business so it is possible that they would have enough

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. Individuals should create a fund where so many celebrities can donate their

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to poor people's food or housing related issues and

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they must ask to assist from that

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if developed countries do

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so it can be beneficial to undeveloped countries. Another point of

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essay is that to whom the

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should give more salary? So I would mention that more and more skilled workers

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should be given more

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because they provide many facilities to the people. It has

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seen that so many doctors, nurses and even teachers are migrating from undeveloped countries to developed countries to have a better life and earn more. That’s why it may affect the economy of a country. The

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should give them good salaries so they don't have to migrate to other countries. To conclude, I would opine that celebrities should be given

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money but

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money, but

to some extent that should be restricted and they should be bound to take part in charity and social welfare related tasks so that we can

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that fund on poor people as I have written above.