it is illegal for people to smoke in all public places and they have provided designated areas where any one can smoke freely without affecting any common man.

Smoking is injurious to

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. Many countries have taken one step forward and it has been made illegal for people to smoke in all public places and they have provided designated areas where

any one

any person

anyone

can smoke freely without affecting any common man. I strongly agree with the statement that smoking kills and countries should make some rules and regulations for it. I

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endorse it with the view that, it has a consensus that smoking affects the

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and

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it is a root cause of many major diseases. It not only stresses the

lungs but

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lungs, but

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causes cancer.

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, smoking in

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public areas

a public area

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can

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indulge others around in passive smoking.

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few individuals are allergic to smoke, when they are beside a smoker their allergy can trigger headache and cause other

health

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issues. I would like to supplement my

view point

a mental position from which things are viewed

viewpoint

with the help of an example that numerous countries have controlled smoking by restricting it to a specific

area

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.

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.

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in planes, public are not allowed

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to do with smoking

. They have installed

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smoke

detectors.

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, in many corporate sectors people are not allowed to do smoking in

office environment

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an office environment

the office environment

and not even on their desk.

they

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They

have to go to

parking

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the parking area

area

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or to the designated place to do smoking.

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to it,

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the government

has erected signboards

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in

at

different places to display non-smoking

area

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.

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,

government

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the government

strictly instructed smoking companies to add a caption of “injurious to

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” on

pack

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a pack

of cigarettes. Which can indicate and provide awareness of

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issues to public. There are more than 7 billion people on the face of earth planet. Everybody thinks differently. One man’s wine may be another’s poison.

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, a few people think that

ban

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a ban

the ban

on smoking will decline the business of cigarette which ultimately makes many people go unemployed.

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will lessen the major income of government which they get in

form

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the form

of taxes from these items. To

cap

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up the topic, it could be justified that lawmakers cannot ban the smoking completely,

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they can reduce it by defining a specific smoking

area

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.

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, they can make

public aware

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the public aware

of

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concerns by taking these measures.