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RE: Invoice, remove unused fees Dear team With reference to the email below, and the attach invoice in relation to the unused reservation. Kindly note that I have booked the mentioned
car
 for 30 minutes and followed the navigation to the
car
 to start my trip as usual. I have searched for the
car
 for over 18 minutes, and checked the streets and the open space parkings
next
 to the Emirates Towers Metro Station, and wasn't able to find it. I think the previous driver who used the
car
 had parked it in a private parking. When I was calling Ekar costumer service to help me locating the
car
, my reservation had been finished.
Therefore
, I have no responsibility in
this
 case, that the
car
 is invisible and someone else parked it in private parking. Kindly remove the unused fees AED8.
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