The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel force in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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There
are
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is
two year
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two-year
comparison
with Fix the agreement mistake
comparisons
units
of electricity by fuel source in Australia.
In 1980 production with Use synonyms
the
total of 100 Correct article usage
a
units
, coal Use synonyms
manufacture
has 50 Wrong verb form
manufacturing
units
, natural Use synonyms
gas
and Use synonyms
hydro power
productions have 20 Correct your spelling
hydropower
units
, and oil Use synonyms
manufacture
Wrong verb form
manufacturing
have
10 Change the verb form
has
units
. In 2000 production with Use synonyms
the
total of 170 Correct article usage
a
units
, coal Use synonyms
manufacture
that takes almost half of it with 130 Wrong verb form
manufacturing
units
, Use synonyms
hydro power
construction has 36 Correct your spelling
hydropower
units
, and oil and natural Use synonyms
gas
construction Use synonyms
have
2 Correct subject-verb agreement
has
units
.
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On the other hand
, there ate Linking Words
two year
comparison as well with Add a hyphen
two-year
units
of electricity by fuel force in France.
In 1980 production with Use synonyms
the
total of 90 Correct article usage
a
units
, Use synonyms
coal
and natural Correct word choice
and coal
gas
construction have 25 Use synonyms
units
. Oil manufacturing Use synonyms
have
20 Change the verb form
has
units
, Use synonyms
while
nuclear power manufacturing Linking Words
have
5 Change the verb form
has
units
. In 2000 management with Use synonyms
the
total of 180 Correct article usage
a
units
, Use synonyms
the
largest protraction is Correct word choice
and the
a
nuclear energy with 126 Remove the article
apply
units
. Coal and grease manufacturing Use synonyms
have
25 Change the verb form
has
units
, and natural Use synonyms
gas
and hydro force creation have 2 Use synonyms
units
.
In conclusion, electricity from the fuel source in Australia doesn't have nuclear energy so that Use synonyms
produce
more coal Correct subject-verb agreement
produces
while
in France, they focus more on Linking Words
nuclear
energy formulation of 2000 Correct article usage
the nuclear
compare
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compared
in
Change preposition
to
1980's
management Correct article usage
the 1980's
that
focuses more on coal and grease.Correct pronoun usage
which
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