The charts show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010
The pie charts compare the percentages of British
students
at the particular university who spoke different languages in addition
to English, in two separate years
.
It is clearly seen that in both years
, the majority of British students
studying at the university were able to speak at least one foreign language
. Moreover
, it is noticeable that amount of second
and third
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third-language
language
speakers increased over the 10 year
period.
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10-year
To begin
with, in the year 2000, 80% of the students
were able to speak one or more foreign languages, and 20% only spoke English. After ten years
, there was a rise of 5% in the proportion those
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of those
second
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a second
language
. There was also
an increase from 10% to 15%, in the proportion who were capable to speak two other languages.
Looking at the specific second
language
spoken, in the year 2000, 30% of the students
could speak Spanish, 15% spoke French, and 10% spoke German. Ten years
later, the proportion of Spanish speakers grew to 35%, there were 5% less
French speakers, and those who spoke German remained stable.Correct quantifier usage
fewer
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