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You and some friends had dinner in a restaurant a few nights ago. The service at the restaurant was terrible and the food was bad. You and two of your friends had severe stomachaches the following day. The food was also overpriced. Write to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter, -explain these problems -give details that you think are relevant -ask the manager to do something about the situation

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 letter to complain about the
food
 quality, price and service related issues that I faced in your
restaurant
. I went to the
restaurant
 with four of my friends on
23rd February night
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the 23rd February night
. We had a terrible experience there as the service was very poor, the quality of
food
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the food
 was bad and
also
 the cost of
dishes
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the dishes
 were too high. We had ordered
dal
consisting of or involving two parts or components usually in pairs
dual
makhana
,
paneer
open up an area or prepare a way
pioneer
 and breads.
Firstly
, the
food
 was given after 30 minutes of ordering.
Secondly
, the taste of both the dishes was pathetic and it did not seem to be freshly prepared.
Lastly
, me and two of
friends
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the friends
 had severe
stomachaches
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stomach aches
 the
next
 day, which was obviously because of the bad quality of
food
 we ate at your
restaurant
. I strongly feel that we ought to be compensated else I will write bad reviews about the
restaurant
at
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on
 all the social networking sites, which will affect your business in a negative way. Looking for your
favorable
encouraging or approving or pleasing
favourable
 response on the same. Thanks and Regards, Kamakshi Sahni
Submitted by kamakshi.sahni2189 on

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