The bar chart below shows the percentage of students who passed their high school competency exams, by subject and gender, during the period 2010-2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
bar chart provides information about the amount
of pupils who passes their exams at the high school. Change the quantifier
number
This
is described by category and gender between the year
2010 and 2011.
Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, it can be seen that forein
languages and mathematics were equally popular Correct your spelling
foreign
by
both boys and girls. Change preposition
with
Furthermore
, computer science experienced a higher rate amongst girls, while
geography was favourable by
boys.Change preposition
for
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