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You arranged to visit a friend on England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write letter to your friend * Explain the important event *apologize for the situation *suggest a new arrangement

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Dear Deborah, Hope
your
Suggestion
you're
 doing fine? I have been eagerly waiting to meet you and spend some pleasant time in England.
However
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,
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,
I have received an invitation to participate in a national baking
event
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 to be held on the 1st week of May in the same week which we had planned for our visit. The National Cake
fest
Suggestion
Fest
 is one of the leading and most important
event
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 for every baker and you know how much I wanted to participate. The platform gives us the opportunity to meet the leading chef and Patisserie and to learn new methods of baking and
also
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 to
show case
a setting in which something can be displayed to best effect
showcase
 our talents to the chefs. The
event
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also
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 gives certificates to the participants. Despite my anticipation to meet you my current situation forces me to delay the tour for a month. I am sorry that I cannot visit you as
initially
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 planned and it must be hard for you to reschedule everything. I
rrreally
in accordance with truth or fact or reality
really
 wish I had an alternative, but you know well how much
this
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event
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 means to me and how well in advance I have been practicing for the same
although
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 I did not expect the dates to get
clashed
very drunk
sloshed
. I am hoping to meet you on
3rd
Suggestion
the 3rd
 of June if everything goes well. I hope you will
also
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 be able to rearrange everything by
then
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. Once
again I
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again, I
 am sorry for the inconvenience caused.Hope you understand my situation. Regards, Pam

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