Nowadays families move to different countries for work. Some people think it has a negative effect on children, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Advances in technology and transportation have made globalization much easier,

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multinational corporations have become considerably more

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is more common to be an expect than it was in the past, some people believe that the children of those families could benefit from the experience of living in foreign countries, while others oppose

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of the advocates of the

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, shall be indicated. Living in a foreign country would be a great opportunity to learn about a new

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, as well as being exposed to a different culture,

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experience would help in widening the spectrum of any individual, regardless of age,

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children will be enriched by being those different experiences, becoming more open minded, making it easier to accept people from different backgrounds with different habits and customs,

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learning a new

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should enable youngsters to be more quick learners, studies show that learning more than

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at a young age could aid them in acquiring other subjects that are not related to their linguistic abilities,

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as mathematics and science.

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some other onions,

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idea, since raising younger generations in foreign country could adhere them from learning their native

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, because most countries only teach their local

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at school, especially in elementary levels, unless

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of their parents is able to dedicate part of his or hers time to teach the child the

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of his parents country, but

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is not always achievable, because usually parents who live outside their homeland are less likely to have enough time for

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responsibility or they might not be even have enough knowledge to teach their mother tongue efficiently,

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the child would unfortunately would have less opportunities to practice his native

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, as a cause for living in a community that do not use

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the youngsters might be detached

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of not having any hands on experience with it. To

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restate my opinion that children raised in foreign countries might suffer greatly from living abroad, to mitigate those negative effect their parents should encourage them to learn their native

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, whether by themselves or by the aid of centres that could help them in learn their homeland

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and they could minimize the cultural gap by strengthening their ties with other citizens of the same nationality that share similar background, in order to be accustomed to their native roots.