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The pie chart below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years

The pie chart below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years
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These pie charts depict the production of energy in different
type
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 for two years in
the
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France. It is clear from the graph that,
the
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coal and gas is the major source in both years in general.
According to
 what is shown, the change
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 coal is slightly small which is 29.80% and 30.93% in 1995 and 2005 respectively
also
 the gas had
similar
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but
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pattern compare to coal the change
only
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0.7
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% difference between the 10 years.
The petrol
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Petrol
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 had
massive
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 alteration in the proportion, which is 29.27% decreased to 19.55% in 1995 and 2005 respectively Meanwhile,
on the other hand
, the energy produced by nuclear power had increased by almost 4%; since 1995
moreover
, the other resources had similar behaviour
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 nuclear power climbed
up to
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 4.9% in 1995 to 9.10% in 2005.
To sum up
, we could say that the energy power of France had been better to be more balanced.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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