Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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With the
development
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of
science
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and
technology
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, we are now living in a modern society
that is
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surrounded by electronics. But still some people
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argue
on which side would be more important: the
History
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or the
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and
Technology
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. I quiet
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knowing
that
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issue is definitely a controversial one. But in my point of view, it’s necessary for us to keep pace with the times. In
this
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essay, I would think the
Science
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and
Technology
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would be more important. My perspective
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is
as follows.
To begin
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with, as we all know that
history
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has laid the foundation for people's
development
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, but we can't testify to its correctness.
To
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With
the
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, in the Song Dynasty, the emperor valued the civilians, but looking down on the military officials. In that case, the Song Dynasty perished. From that, we can know why it’s very important for our country to consolidate our
defense
(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies
defence
constantly to have
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the ability
to defend against enemies. What’s more, we can acquire many kinds of knowledge in many fields through ancient books,
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as the content of it in rites, medical
science
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and so on.
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, the noble traditional rituals inherited from the ancestors can be promoted and developed by us, to let them become the symbol of the Chinese spirit.
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, because some of the
history
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is recorded by a
third
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party, the situation cannot be clearly recorded, which may lead to a misunderstanding of the truth. As a student, it’s very important to understanding historical
facts whether
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facts, whether
it will be an interest supplement or an academic knowledge.
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and
Technology
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is of higher value than
history
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, personally I agree that the continued advanced and
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of our world is paramount.
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of all, the
technology
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is the trend of modern progress. Learning
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science
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science, technology
technology
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will meet more jobs in the future, because
science
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involves many aspects of learning,
such
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as Chemistry, Physics, Mathematics, Biology. And it can encourage us to develop ourselves in many ways.
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, with the help of
science
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and
technology
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, we can have a more effective way to study with the high-tech devices. By the way, learning
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subject can provide us a chance to build a high-tech
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device
by ourselves, and these devices would become very useful for protecting the environment. As we all know, new energy vehicles are emerging in our daily lives. Because it's powered by electricity, it doesn't have carbon dioxide emissions that could help alleviate the planet's greenhouse effect. Perhaps by learning from
science
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, we can
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create a brand of our own new energy vehicles in the future to contribute to the good environment of the earth. All in all, we must keep pace with the times, so there is no doubt that the
science
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and
technology
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will be more useful in the future life.
However
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,
history
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is past tense, we just need to remember it in order to prevent the same mistakes we will make.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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