The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the
amount
of men and women in Change the quantifier
number
further
education in Britain in three different periods and whether they were studying full time
or part-time.
Add a hyphen
full-time
Overall
, it’s clear that male and female ones
have different results. Only a small percentage used to attend class part-time compared to the scheme.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
While
the males have a slightly
decrease in the different years for the full-time system Change the adverb
slight
instead
for females is the opposite with a significantly
increase Change the adverb
significant
by
Change preposition
over
the
time. As we can see in the graph the best score is in Correct article usage
apply
the
1990/1991 for women with more Change the article
apply
1000
enrollments and for men just 20 years before. The negative view can Change preposition
than 1000
show
as the worst year for part-time studying was 1970/1971. In the same Wrong verb form
shown
year
the men reached the best result for full-time with an average Add a comma
,year
around
1000 goers .
It’s predicted that in Change preposition
of around
large
majority Add an article
the large
the
Change preposition
of the
full time
studying system compared to part-time with big odds.Add a hyphen
full-time
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