The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
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The diagram illustrates, seven and three steps respectively, for plaster manufacturing and concrete manufacturing with
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equipment
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(
Cursher
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Crusher
, Mixer, Rotating heater, Grinder and Concrete mixer) and resources
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as limestones, Clay, binder, Water, Sand and Gravels for building purposes. Limestone and clay are crushed and the resulting powder is
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mixed before being passed through a rotating heater. Once heated
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mixture travels over a conveyor belt and is grounded through a grinder. Now that the cement has been produced, it is packaged and transported to a building site where it can be used to make concrete. Concrete is made up of 10% water, 15% cement, 25% sand and half gravel. All of these are added together in a concrete mixer and rotated until
concrete
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the concrete
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is yielded.
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the equipment and stages of production of both types of cement and concrete are different and simple.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • construction
  • cement-making
  • raw materials
  • crushing
  • mixing
  • heating
  • grinding
  • cement powder
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • concrete
  • versatility
  • strength
  • aggregate
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