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Some people believe that the activity of large multinational corporations mostly benefits the economy of developing countries. Other people take the opposite view and feel that these large multinationals are generally harmful. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Multinational companies are huge and profit getting giants that exists all over the world. Some people believe that the activity of large multinational corporations mostly benefits the economy of developing countries. Other people take the opposite view and feel that these large multinationals are generally harmful. Many of these multinational corporations set up business in developing countries due to lower cost. Production that cost low will ensure that these companies reap the most income. But at the same time, they
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 ensure that the locals are given job opportunities.
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, multinational companies are corporate monsters who generally only think of making profits. Deforestation occurs to clear land for these multinational corporations to set up their factories, use the available resources and dump the rubbish back to the land that gave them space. In conclusion, multinational companies
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Job creation
  • Technology transfer
  • Economic growth
  • Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
  • Exploitation of labor
  • Unfair labor practices
  • Working conditions
  • Job security
  • Environmental degradation
  • Pollution
  • Deforestation
  • Depletion of natural resources
  • Cultural homogenization
  • Erosion of local cultures
  • Balance and regulation
  • Host countries
  • Implement policies
  • Mitigate negative impacts
  • Enforcing labor laws
  • Environmental regulations
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