Some people think that having a set retirement age( 65 years) for everybody regardless of occupation is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive pension at earlier age. • Do you agree? • Which type of worker do you think should benefit from early retirement? Give reason for your answer and include any recent example from your knowledge of experience.
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Most governments have their specific rules and regulations regarding the
age
of retirement
of their citizens. Many of them have retirem
ent
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a retirement age
age
around 65 years, regardless of their occupation. In this
essay we are going to discuss importance of ear
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the importance
retirement
and pension
benefit
at an earlier age
for workers involved in certain stressful
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certain stressful professions
profession
.
I strongly believe that worker from stressful profession
should have privilage of ear
ly a special advantage or immunity or benefit not enjoyed by all
privilege
privileges
retirement
and pension
benefit
. First
of all, some profession
demand extrao
rdinary mental and physical strength. So that they can deal with extremeSuggestion
demands
ly difficult situation.
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an extremely difficult situation
Secondly
, their health does not only affect work related to them but
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them, but
also
may have negative impact on liv
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a negative impact
f peo
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the lives
Lastly
, work efficiency increases when employees are fit. However
, fitness depends on individual person and ca
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the individual person
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individual persons
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age
.
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profession, like
uld
get benefit
of early retirement
and pension
for supporting their post retirement
life. Professionals such
as Firefighters are life savers. Their job involves routinely dealing with heat exposure, high core body temperature, prolonged, intense exertion. Similarly
, Border security forces serve the nation to ensure its peace and safety. They exhaust themselve day an
d night for national security. reflexive form of "them"
themselves
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, their lives become a battle field when it comes to saving others life. Such
people should be honored and aw
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honoured
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etirement facility and
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an early retirement facility
early retirement facilities
pension
benefit
.
To conclude, it is very important to have retirement
terms and conditions flexible enough as per individual requirement and professional needs. Since, some extraordinary soulful professionals require immense passion, they deserve to be honoured with the facility of early retirement
and should receive pension
at an early age
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