Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.. Do you agree or disagree?.

#salary #job #satisfaction

Some people believe that the best amount of wage is really important than the

satisfaction

of the job. According to me. I partially agree with

this

idea because we need

good

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a good salary

salary

fulfill

put in effect

fulfil

our variety of needs and

also

we should be satisfied about our professional

life

. In

this

essay, I will explain my point of view why we need good

salary

and

satisfaction

to be

success

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successful

as an employee. As human beings, we do many things to own

satisfaction

Satisfaction

is more important because of it gives more advantages to our

life

as well as company or department where we work.

For instance

, as a teacher, if I am not satisfied about my school, my

salary

or my colleagues I cannot be successful at the school.

In addition

, I unable to build a good relationship with the students and my team.

to a very great extent or degree

I cannot provide my service properly to students.

As a result

, my student will get less performance in my subject. That's why I believe people need

satisfaction

in their

career

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careers

to be successful and effective. To build job

satisfaction

need skill, good income, good

relationship among

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relationship, among

other coworker and it depends on personality too.

On the other hand

the big

salary

provides us

number

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a number

of benefits. If we have good

income we can

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income, we can

easily buy what we need for our

life

nowadays

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Nowadays

, people need more and more money for

achieve

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achieving

achieves

their

life

goals.

For example

, if someone

have

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has

good monthly

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a good monthly salary

salary

he or she can provide good educational facilities for his or her children. The

salary

is mainly affect

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is mainly affecting

has mainly affected

mainly affects

people when they choose their profession.

However

, some people decide

choose

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to choose

their profession only thinking about

salery

something that remunerates

salary

celery

salaries

This

situation make stress and it

affect

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affects

our personal

life health

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life, health

and our society too. According to

me I

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me, I

believe that both

salary

and

satisfaction

important to

successful

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a successful life

life

. In conclusion, certain individuals think that high wages is

important

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more important

than that of satisfactory.. I trust both high

salary

and

satisfaction

carrier

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carrying

similarly

in essential to be successful.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21Grammar mistakes
 

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338 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

remuneration
financial security
motivation
luxuries
material possessions
fulfillment
work-life balance
stress levels
mental well-being
job security

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