The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided bar chart illustrates the data of Australian
men
and women doing regular exercises across six Use synonyms
age
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groups
in the year Use synonyms
of
2010.
In general, there are relatively more Australian women were more dominant in Change preposition
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to have
regular Change the verb form
having
workout
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workouts
working
out regularly than Australian Correct word choice
and working
men
. The Use synonyms
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of 45 -54 was the most active Use synonyms
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among women, Use synonyms
while
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of 15-24 was the most active Use synonyms
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among Use synonyms
men
.
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of 15-24, almost all the female Use synonyms
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groups
were more active than Use synonyms
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in all other Use synonyms
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. Interestingly, among the female, the middle Use synonyms
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were the most active ones in doing exercises working out. that 53.5% and 53% demonstrated in the Use synonyms
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of 45-54 and 55-64 respectively. Use synonyms
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However
, the youngest and eldest female Linking Words
groups
showed a low level of doing exercise on a regular basis which stood at approximately 47%.
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group
(15-24 Use synonyms
age
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) did the highest level of sports working out, and it was Use synonyms
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they were the only Remove the article
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that Use synonyms
has
had over 50%. The two Unnecessary verb
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less
least active Correct quantifier usage
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groups
belonged to 25-34 and 35-44, the record stood at merely nearly 42.2% and 39.5% respectively. The activity level of the latter Use synonyms
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is Use synonyms
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approximately 10% less than that of Unnecessary verb
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female
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