My name is Peeyush Saxena and I am a working as development manager in XYZ company at Gurgaon location. This mail is with regard to the opening of management role in your company which was placed on vacancy board last week.

Dear Manager, My name is Peeyush Saxena and I a
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development manager in XYZ company at Gurgaon location.
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mail is with regard to the opening of m
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management roles
the management role
a management role
in your company which was placed on v
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the vacancy board
last
week. I have working experience of 15 years with 5 years of relevant experience in finance domain. I have been instrumental i
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rolling out new processes as well as taking care of end to end need of small size setup. I have
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certifications
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as I was on leave for a week before that. I see myself a suitable candidate for the job and would like to apply for it. And please let me know if more information is required from my end. My mail id is [email protected]
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I look forward to hear f
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response. Your sincerely, Peeyush Saxena

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