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Some people argue that girls and boys should be educated separately, while others think that it is more advantageous for children to study at the same school. What is your opinion?

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Some countries have single-sex education models, while in
others both
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others, both
 single sex and mixed schools co-exist, and it is up to the parents or the children to decide which model is preferable. In the world we have some countries which are Islamic, they have single-sex education and they force you to go to separate
school
. Some people think it is more effective to educate boys and girls in separate schools because they believe
this
 environment reduces distractions and encourages students to concentrate on their studies.
Also
, these people say when boys and girls are in the same
school
 boys want to get attention from girls and
this
 will distract boys from learning.
On the other hand
, some people would argue that mixed schools prepare their students better for their future lives. Girls and boys learn to live and work together
form
a giver or sender
from
 an early age.
This
 is very important in life because one day one girl and one boy will live together and
this
 situation can help them, how they should behave to each other and how they should be responsible to each other.
However
, in some countries government force student to be separate from each other in
school
.
This
 is in their culture and they can change it. In my opinion,
first thing
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the first thing
 we should see is the country which we are living there have
mix
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a mix school
school
 in their culture or not. If they do, it is better to send
student
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a student
the student
students
 to
mix
school
 because they can learn something which they
can not
can not
cannot
 learn
in
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at
 the separate
school
. I am going to
mix
school
 and I can see the different between these two situations. One thing which I learned in
mix
school
 was how we should behave with girls and
this
 thing is very important in our life.
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