Some people argue that girls and boys should be educated separately, while others think that it is more advantageous for children to study at the same school. What is your opinion?

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Some countries have single-sex education models, while in
others both
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others, both
single sex and mixed schools co-exist, and it is up to the parents or the children to decide which model is preferable. In the world we have some countries which are Islamic, they have single-sex education and they force you to go to separate
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. Some people think it is more effective to educate boys and girls in separate schools because they believe
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environment reduces distractions and encourages students to concentrate on their studies.
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, these people say when boys and girls are in the same
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boys want to get attention from girls and
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will distract boys from learning.
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, some people would argue that mixed schools prepare their students better for their future lives. Girls and boys learn to live and work together
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is very important in life because one day one girl and one boy will live together and
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situation can help them, how they should behave to each other and how they should be responsible to each other.
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, in some countries government force student to be separate from each other in
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is in their culture and they can change it. In my opinion,
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mix
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a mix school
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in their culture or not. If they do, it is better to send
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a student
the student
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school
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because they can learn something which they
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at
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. I am going to
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school
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and I can see the different between these two situations. One thing which I learned in
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school
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was how we should behave with girls and
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thing is very important in our life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Single-sex education
  • Gender stereotypes
  • Co-educational system
  • Social development
  • Gender equality
  • Psychological impacts
  • Collaborative skills
  • Diversity of opinions
  • Comprehensive social development
  • Equal access to resources
  • Educational environment
  • Distractions
  • Real-world scenarios
  • Academic advantages
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