The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart provides the idea of how New
Zealand
mortality rate Change noun form
Zealand's
transformation
from 1901 and 2101.
The difference between the two data has been significantly visible from 1901 up to 2101 Replace the word
transformed
where
Correct word choice
when
birthrate
increased slowly until 1941 shoots up Correct article usage
the birthrate
on
1961 and drastically decreased.
Change preposition
in
Death
toll has been consistently growing Add an article
The death
from
2061 and Change preposition
since
stay
the same until 2101.
The government will review its program in determining its cause and interventions to come up with Wrong verb form
stayed
the
solutions to eliminate the scarcity of workforce and Correct article usage
apply
populations
demand. Fix the agreement mistake
population
Death
toll is overtaking the number of newbornsAdd an article
The death
..
Replace the punctuation
.
...
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