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The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph shows how the populations of
India
 and
China
 have changed since 2000 and how they will change in the future. In 2000, there were more people living in
China
 than in
India
. The number of Chinese was 1.25
bill ion
Correct your spelling
billion
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,
while
India
's
population
 was about 1
billion
. Between 2000 and the present, there has been a 0.2
billion
 rise in the number of Indian citizens. Over the same period,
China
's
population
 has increased by 0.1
billion
 to reach over 1.35
billion
.
According to
 the graph, the
population
 in
India
 will increase more quickly than in
China
, and experts say that by 2030, both countries will have the same
population
 of 1.45
billion
.
After
this
,
China
's
population
 is likely to fall slightly to 1.4
billion
 in 2050,
while
India
's
population
 will probably increase and reach 1.6
billion
.
Thus
, over the 50-year period,
India
 is going to experience steady growth in its
population
 and it will overtake
China
.
On the other hand
,
China
's
population
 will peak in 2030 and
then
 begin to fall

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Vocabulary: Replace the words india, china, population, billion with synonyms.
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