The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph shows how the populations of
India
and China
have changed since 2000 and how they will change in the future.
In 2000, there were more people living in China
than in India
. The number of Chinese was 1.25 bill ion
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billion
while
India
's population
was about 1 billion
. Between 2000 and the present, there has been a 0.2 billion
rise in the number of Indian citizens. Over the same period, China
's population
has increased by 0.1 billion
to reach over 1.35 billion
.
According to
the graph, the population
in India
will increase more quickly than in China
, and experts say that by 2030, both countries will have the same population
of 1.45 billion
. After
this
, China
's population
is likely to fall slightly to 1.4 billion
in 2050, while
India
's population
will probably increase and reach 1.6 billion
.
Thus
, over the 50-year period, India
is going to experience steady growth in its population
and it will overtake China
. On the other hand
, China
's population
will peak in 2030 and then
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