Dear Sir,
I am writing to let you know that I bought a pressure cooker from your shop almost 2 days ago. When I decided to use apparatus to make some food for my hubby, I found there is an issue at the upper side of the kitchen article. Means its evaporation section had not worked properly. it is
very
essential part to cook delicious food.
I am sure you provide a solutionAdd an article
a very
The noun phrase very essential part seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
,
when I let you know what happened when I call to shop to sort out the earlier mentioned problem. You know what? Your shop seller behaviour is very poor toward the customer. When I told him about the kitchen accessory problem on the phone, he react like he did not know much about it. Even though, he has not given me a proper time to tell him my queries. He said in Remove the comma
apply
It appears that you have an unnecessary comma before the dependent clause marker when. Consider removing the comma.
very
bad manner, I have no time, I call you back when I am free and after Add an article
a very
The noun phrase very bad manner seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
that
he does not call me back, while Add a comma
,that
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase after that. Consider adding a comma.
i
am waiting till today.
I would like to tell Change the capitalization
I
The pronoun I should always be capitalized.
Correct article usage
the manger
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
manger
to sort out my equipment issue or replaced it with a new one. I would suggest him to give proper training to your shopkeepers about equipment’s and tell them how to guide the customers on the phone?
Thank you for Correct your spelling
manager
The word manger doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
co-operation
Tayyab HussainCorrect pronoun usage
your co-operation
It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.