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Government should provide free public Transportation facilities 24/7 to reduce traffic congestion. To what extent do you agree or Disagree

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In the present world
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the population of the people Is at its peak
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because of
this
 the number of transportation is increasing rapidly
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thus
 led to
traffic
congestion
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moreover
 led to the Increase in Co2
emmisions
the act of emitting; causing to flow forth
emissions
 in the surrounding.I support the statement that government should provide public
transport
 just to control
traffic
congestion
.
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 Analysing the advantages of public
transport
, as well as the disadvantages of increase in
vehicle
 will
prove
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Prove
this
.
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 To commence with
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 there are several
reason
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reasons
 which points out the requirement of
public
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public vehicles
a public vehicle
vehicle
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Firstly
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 public
transport
help
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helps
 us to reduce
traffic
congestion
 in that specific city.
Secondly
, the
use
 of public vehicles minimizes the cause of co2
emmisions
the act of emitting; causing to flow forth
emissions
.
For instance
, a city
such
 as Delhi
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a major city in India) is covered with full of mist because of abundance of
transport
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Therefore
, the only solution for
this
 problem is the
use
 of public
transport
. On the other hand, just by introducing public
transport
 does not reduce
traffic
congestion
 and pollution.
Therefore
 the
use
 of public vehicles should be made compulsory
such
 as
use
 of own
vehicle
 in alternate days while in the remaining days we should
use
 the public
vehicle
.
Moreover
, the
use
 of Electronic cars
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bycycle
a wheeled vehicle that has two wheels and is moved by foot pedals
bicycle
bicycles
 should be recommended.
Likewise
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 we must make the public understand the problems caused by
traffic
congestion
 by conducting awareness program in schools
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colleges etc. To summarize,
Traffic
congestion
 is one of the major issue throughout the world. Which can be solved by following certain rules
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,
thus
 become apparent that the government should provide public
transport
 to reduce
traffic
congestion
.
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