You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam,

#bank #receipt #card #envelope #head #office #concern #address #sir #madam

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to acknowledge the delivery of

parcel

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a parcel

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which was meant to contain my platinum visa

credit

card

However

, the package just had a letter explaining the offers that come along with the

credit

card

, but the

card

was missing. In general,

credit

cards are glued to a welcome letter

which

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that

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contains the

card

number and other official details of the customer.

For instance

, the customer id and savings

account

linked to it are on the welcome letter, which is

also

missing from the package.

This

credit

card

was linked to my personal savings

account

and I have a deep concern that whoever gets access to it, gets access to my saving

account

details.

This

is a very old

account

and I

dont

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don't

intend to close it. I know there are various covers for

the

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apply

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credit

card

frauds

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fraud

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but the savings

account

does not have any fraud protection. Please consider

this

as a formal complaint and take it to closure. I need

investigation

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an investigation

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what happened with my

credit

card

. I

also

want an enquiry with the courier service to understand what precautions do they take to avoid

such

thefts at their end?

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Maybe

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May be

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Maybe

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its

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it's

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time for your bank to reconsider courier vendors. Awaiting a positive reply from your end. Yours faithfully, Neha Seth

Fri Feb 14 2020

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

218 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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