You recently organised in all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they really like the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing in connection with my recent stay in the

Hotel

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Adara at Richmond, Melbourne on 12th February

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2020. Unfortunately, the

participants

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were not happy with the

food

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served for lunch. Previously, one of my colleagues stayed here, and she really liked your

service

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appartment

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apartment

and the facilities have been provided and she recommends me here. So, I decided to book your conference room for my meeting, and I am glad to tell you that

participants

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do like the place and

service

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of your

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. The venue of your

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is located at the central, which can be accessed from the main station Flinders Street. The tram stops and the other

amenties

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amenities

were easily

assessible

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accessible

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, which helped

participants

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a lot.

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, the

food

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was provided was not up to the mark as per our expectations from the

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of 4.5 ratings. We've ordered 30 plates of Chicken Schnitzel, 20 plates of Chicken Parma, and some basic confectionaries. The chicken which was provided,

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was uncooked. Due to

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, most of our

particpants

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participants

got

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poisioning

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poisoning

and

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allergies on their faces

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the

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day and

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even though

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terrible

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given by your

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to our

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This

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was not expected after paying you

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advance payment. I would let to you know that our

participants

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gave some genuine feedback for your

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to improve the

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food

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service

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, in order to bring fresh

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, it's better to go yourself and check the

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, and it should be hot and everything

what

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is demanded should be kept in the kitchen. To compensate me for

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tremendous

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, I ask you

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my full amount right now or offer a free

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. I would love to stay in your lovely suites in the near future. I look forward to hearing from you soon at the earliest, Yours faithfully, Ms Mansi Talreja

Sat Feb 15 2020

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IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

330 words

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You recently organised in all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they really like the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A successful person is one who has earned a lot of money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same way as adults by authorities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?