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You recently organised in all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they really like the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.

#company #place #hotel #feedback #participants #food #lunch #manager
Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing in connection with my recent stay in the
Hotel
 Adara at Richmond, Melbourne on 12th February
,
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 2020. Unfortunately, the
participants
 were not happy with the
food
 served for lunch. Previously, one of my colleagues stayed here, and she really liked your
service
appartment
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apartment
 and the facilities have been provided and she recommends me here. So, I decided to book your conference room for my meeting, and I am glad to tell you that
participants
 do like the place and
service
 of your
hotel
. The venue of your
hotel
 is located at the central, which can be accessed from the main station Flinders Street. The tram stops and the other
amenties
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amenities
 were easily
assessible
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accessible
assessable
, which helped
participants
 a lot.
However
, the
food
 was provided was not up to the mark as per our expectations from the
hotel
 of 4.5 ratings. We've ordered 30 plates of Chicken Schnitzel, 20 plates of Chicken Parma, and some basic confectionaries. The chicken which was provided,
it
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was uncooked. Due to
this
, most of our
particpants
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participants
 got
food
poisioning
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poisoning
 and
the
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allergies on their faces
on
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the
next
 day and
eventhough
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even though
 I gave you a list of items, the lactose milk was not provided. I am shocked by
this
 terrible
service
 given by your
hotel
 to our
participants
.
This
 was not expected after paying you
full
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 advance payment. I would let to you know that our
participants
 gave some genuine feedback for your
hotel
 to improve the
food
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service
, in order to bring fresh
food
, it's better to go yourself and check the
food
, and it should be hot and everything
what
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 is demanded should be kept in the kitchen. To compensate me for
this
 tremendous
service
, I ask you
refund
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 my full amount right now or offer a free
service
. I would love to stay in your lovely suites in the near future. I look forward to hearing from you soon at the earliest, Yours faithfully, Ms Mansi Talreja

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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