You recently organised in all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they really like the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing in connection with my recent stay in the

Hotel

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Adara at Richmond, Melbourne on 12th February

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2020. Unfortunately, the

participants

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were not happy with the

food

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served for lunch. Previously, one of my colleagues stayed here, and she really liked your

service

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appartment

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apartment

and the facilities have been provided and she recommends me here. So, I decided to book your conference room for my meeting, and I am glad to tell you that

participants

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do like the place and

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of your

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. The venue of your

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is located at the central, which can be accessed from the main station Flinders Street. The tram stops and the other

amenties

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amenities

were easily

assessible

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accessible

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, which helped

participants

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a lot.

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, the

food

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was provided was not up to the mark as per our expectations from the

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of 4.5 ratings. We've ordered 30 plates of Chicken Schnitzel, 20 plates of Chicken Parma, and some basic confectionaries. The chicken which was provided,

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was uncooked. Due to

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, most of our

particpants

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participants

got

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poisioning

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poisoning

and

the

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allergies on their faces

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the

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day and

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even though

I gave you a list of items, the lactose milk was not provided. I am shocked by

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terrible

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given by your

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to our

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was not expected after paying you

full

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advance payment. I would let to you know that our

participants

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gave some genuine feedback for your

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to improve the

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food

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service

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, in order to bring fresh

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, it's better to go yourself and check the

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, and it should be hot and everything

what

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is demanded should be kept in the kitchen. To compensate me for

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tremendous

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, I ask you

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my full amount right now or offer a free

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. I would love to stay in your lovely suites in the near future. I look forward to hearing from you soon at the earliest, Yours faithfully, Ms Mansi Talreja

Sat Feb 15 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

330 words

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You recently organised in all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they really like the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.

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