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has become
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major global issue and arising on
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daily basis. In a few countries, it's been legal for
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person of any age to apply for a job and the companies cannot decline their application just because of their age. I completely think it
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a positive development and I would like to discuss
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positive impacts
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in the following paragraphs.
Firstly
, the jobless will get more opportunities to get a new job. As the proportion of jobless people is increasing drastically,
however
, through
this
law, there would be more chances for them to get a new working job, which will directly lower the percentage of crimes, because crimes are mostly done by the jobless and frustrated person.
Also
, it will directly lead to the nation's development because as
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more people
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get hired by
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multinational companies
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it will affect
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country, which will result in the growth of both the individual and constituency.
For example
, BANGLADESH has applied
this
law,
due to
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generation are getting
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and it produced a tremendous outcome because BANGLADESH has become one of the
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in the ASIA.
Hence
,
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of
such
laws is necessary to build in
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positive way.
Secondly
, there would be the rise of rivalry between the redundant population.
Competition
will force them to work hard to achieve the goal of their life because
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produces extraordinary talents, which may lead the nation to a very high level.
Also
, the literacy rate will
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affected in increasing order and they will get
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of other countries to invest in them.
For example
, KERALA one of the most literate
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INDIA, is the main targeted place for many corporate sectors to establish their factories and offices
.
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,
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life to produce good results.
In conclusion, there should be
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of placement for any age group because it would
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decrease in the unemployment rate and
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, there would be
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competition
and to touch the peak of the goal of
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life,
competition
is required.
Due to
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, the prohibition of
such
codes is beneficial.