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In some countries in Europe, some children from the age of 11 or 13 go to schools to learn more practical skills that will help them get a job. Other children stay in schools which provide a more general academic education. What should schools do to prepare students for the world of work? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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One of the most controversial
issue
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issues
 today relates to education that whether
admit
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to admit
admitting
 pupils for
vacantional
of or relating to a vocation or occupation; especially providing or undergoing training in special skills
vocational
cources
education imparted in a series of lessons or meetings
courses
 or in the schools to
grap
any of various juicy fruit of the genus Vitis with green or purple skins; grow in clusters
grape
graph
textbooks
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textbook
knowledge
for
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to
 getting jobs.In
this
 essay, I am going to examine the question from both point of views and I will give my suggestion at ending of
this
 essay. On one side of the argument there are
number
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a number
 of reasons for
importance
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the importance
 of extra academic courses.
Firstly
, in the early age, children learn fast and easily.
Moreover
, the skills they learn stays
last
 longer. A particularly good example is
,
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,
in young age, children
grap
any number of entities (members) considered as a unit
group
grasp
 things what they see from their parents
,
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,
it means their mind, learn and
immitate
reproduce someone's behavior or looks
imitate
 things.
Therefore
, practical skills
;
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;
such
 as, dancing, singing
,
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,
 drawing, acting are best to learn in the early age.
On the other hand
, it is
also
 possible to make the opposing case that theoretical
knowledge
 is
require
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required
 to understand basic academic skills.
In other words
,
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,
learning books is
first step
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the first step
 of reaching at higher ranks in a life.
Futhermore
in addition
Furthermore
, academic
knowledge
 is used to teach practical
knowledge
.
Thus
,
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,
rather than focusing directly on skills, students have to work on their core subjects.
For instance
,
recent study
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a recent study
recent studies
the recent study
 by
education welfare group
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an education, welfare group
an education welfare group
the education welfare group
 in 2017
,
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,
reported that 90% of pupils get jobs in their fields, who passed their core subjects.Even in the interviews, most of the questions are asked by interviewers, on the basis of academic
knowledge
. As we have seen, there
are
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is
 no easy answer to
this
 question. On balance.
However
, I tend to believe that both academic and practical skills are same like sides of two coins, stay together and use together
,
Accept space
,
thus
 both are required to make career successful.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • vocational training programs
  • curriculum
  • critical thinking
  • problem-solving
  • communication skills
  • career guidance
  • counseling
  • internships
  • apprenticeships
  • local industries
  • businesses
  • digital literacy
  • technological skills
  • entrepreneurship
  • innovation
  • financial literacy
  • budgeting
  • teamwork
  • collaboration
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