It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be Give some reason why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought together Include any relevant example from your experience

Nowadays , it is ve

ry

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common to see families aparted.

How

ever, i

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n past situation was different as people used to live in large joint families.In my opinion, there are some key factors that play to separate families directly or indirectly.

Firstly

, place where people work may be in same city f

ar from h

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the same city

ome or another city.

Thus

they g

et less t

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Thus, they

ime to spend with family and the sense of family as a whole may begin to fall down.As a solution to

this

peo

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for

e shou

ld try

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person

to spend weekends with family and even try to take them on travel o

r

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to

picnic during holidays.

Secondly

, people are seem to

have la

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seem

are seeming

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king of underst

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to lack

anding and emtional at

tachment

determined or actuated by emotion rather than reason

emotional

.

As a result

, we can observe how people's tendancy to

wards is

an attitude of mind especially one that favors one alternative over others

tendency

increasing.

This

can cause children feeling desarated a

nd depres

forsaken by owner or inhabitants

deserted

disoriented

sed.So, children spend more time on social media and with friends rather than parents.How we can overcome

this

issue?To achieve

this

, parents ought to create an environment that make childr

en f

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makes

eel a selfless bond with each other.

Also

, they should celebrate all festivals together. As

for exam

ple, I

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remember a friend of my father is manager at

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a manager

the manager

nk.Due to his post, he often travels to different states for business purpose, yet he never misses to take care of his family persons.He manages to spend festivals and most of the weekends with family. Even though he has a busy schedule , he alway

s

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,

keeps track of his children's educational performance who study at secondary school.I think

this

is what we can call out a perfect family. To sum up, family is a strong hope for us to thrive in

this

fraught world.So, every one m

ust learn

all people

everyone

to look for family needs over personal benifits.By

giving

financial assistance in time of need

benefits

true value and importance to family persons we can definately

brought fa

without question and beyond doubt

definitely

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ilies t

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bring

ogether.