Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: * Say why you would like to go on the trip * Suggest what you could do to help during the trip * Ask other questions about the trip

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I am writing to you in connection with a three-day school trip to another country. It sounds amazing to me that we as parents could be a part of

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trip. It has been a long time, I did not meet teachers and other

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parents in

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a huge gathering. I hope

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trip would give me an opportunity to know them better and I could make a few friends. Apart from that, I could spend an ample amount of time with many offsprings including mine.

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, I would like to mention that I am a guitarist and love to play music. When everyone would get tired after walking all day, my music might give them

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experience and they could feel relaxed.

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, I worked as an event manager in an organization where I had organized various events. I could aid staff

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any kind of activity. As we are travelling abroad, many people might not familiar with the weather conditions. It would be great if you could inform us about the clothes and accessories that we should carry.

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, I would like to know about the on-site medical care centre facilities. I hope you could able to answer all my queries. I look forward to your reply. Yours Faithfully, Sneha

Wed Feb 19 2020

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

214 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

enthusiastic
valuable experience
expertise
educational objectives
supervision
ensure safety
bonding
workshops
logistics
coordinates
travel arrangements
clear communication
support
responsibilities
manage schedules

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