You work from home and the equipement you use for your job is faulty. Write a letter to the company. * explianing the problem. * how it has affected your work. * what you want them to do.

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Dear sir, I am writing

this

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letter because the keyboard of the

laptop

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which was purchased from your company is

malfuntioning

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malfunctioning

.The

laptop

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is an

acer

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Acer

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brand with model and serial

number

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numbers

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N16P1 and 9290324 respectively. While using the

laptop

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this

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morning, I noticed that the numeric keys as well as the alphabetic keys were not functioning. The

Laptop

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was turned off and restarted but the problem persisted. Due to

this

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problem, I have been unable to reply

work related

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emails and cannot access the files on my

laptop

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Infact

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In fact

,the

laptop

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has disrupted my work for the day. If possible, the company should send an engineer to my home to fix the problem as soon as possible but if the issue cannot be fixed my

laptop

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should be replaced because it is still within

it's

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its

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warranty period. I expect a swift response from you. Thanks. Yours faithfully, Araba- Giwa Mariam.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

150 words

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