The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the
population
of
Japan
in various
years
between 1950 to 2055.
In addition
to the line
graph
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,graph
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there
are
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is
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statistical
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a statistical
the statistical
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comparison
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of aged
people
above 65
years
. As per data, there are
population
counts recorded for every 5
years
staring
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starting
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from 1950 and predicted till the
future
year
2055. In 1950
Japan
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Japan's
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population
was 84.1
million
. From 1950
population
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the population
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grows 4-5
million
for
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apply
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every 5
years
till 1970. In 1975 there are significant growth and ended in 111.9
million
. After 1970 there are gradual growth till
present
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the present
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year
.
Japan
also
predicated
population
for
future
years
,
according to
the data the
population
will fall to 89.9
million
in the
year
2055.
In
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the other
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other hand
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, there were records for aged
people
above 65
years
. In
year
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the year
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1950, 4.1
million
senior citizens with a percentage of 4.9%. In 2005 it grows
till
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to
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20% with 25.7
million
people
. As per
future
data, it will grow
upto
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up to
41% aged
people
over 65
years
with 36.5
million
. In conclusion,
Japan
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Japan's
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total
population
will fall in
future
years
whereas
aged
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the aged
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people
population
will be increased.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, japan, years, people, future, year, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.

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