The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart provides
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information about
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Japan's
population
in millions from 1950 to 2055 and the table gives information about the part of the
population
who were older than 65
years
.
Initially
,
at
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1950
Japan
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Japan's
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population
was
least
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recorded,
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population
grows gradually and reaches its peak value
at
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2005 from
then
the Japanese
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count
started declining and the prediction is that
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2055 their
population
will be as low as their
population
in
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100
years
ago From the graph we can observe that the least recorded
population
from the year 1950 to 2055 is 84.1
million
recorded in the year 1950 and the
people
who are older than 65
years
are 4.1
million
in number which
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around 5% of the total
population
The predicted
second
least
count
happens at 2055 which is similar to the
population
count
in 1955, 90
million
but the percentage of
people
over 65
years
in doubled in 2055 than 1955. Though the Japanese
population
makes a steady climb from
84.1million
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84.1 million
in 1950 to 127.8
million
2005
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, from there onwards it is predicted that the Japanese
population
will face a sharp downfall in
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population
growth and
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will reach 89.9
million
in 2055. Though their
population
count
decreases after 2005, the percentage
people
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older than 65
years
constantly increases. It is predicted that
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2055 nearly 40% of their
population
will be older than 65
years
, which is more than 8 times
of
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the percentage of older
people
in 1950.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, years, count, million, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reaches" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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